Criminal by Terra Elan McVoy

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Title: Criminal
Author: Terra Elan McVoy
Release date: May 7, 2013
Publisher: Simon Pulse
Pages: 288
Source: Edelweiss/Publisher
Reading level: YA
Challenge: YA Contemp Challenge

A searing and gripping read that explores the depths of desperation true love can inspire, from the author of Being Friends with Boys.

Nikki’s life is far from perfect, but at least she has Dee. Her friends tell her that Dee is no good, but Nikki can’t imagine herself without him. He’s hot, he’s dangerous, he has her initials tattooed over his heart, and she loves him more than anything. There’s nothing Nikki wouldn’t do for Dee. Absolutely nothing.

So when Dee pulls Nikki into a crime—a crime that ends in murder—Nikki tells herself that it’s all for true love. Nothing can break them apart. Not the police. Not the arrest that lands Nikki in jail. Not even the investigators who want her to testify against him.

But what if Dee had motives that Nikki knew nothing about? Nikki’s love for Dee is supposed to be unconditional…but even true love has a limit. And Nikki just might have reached hers.

Criminal is the first book I’ve read by Terra Elan McVoy and I know it’s a branch out from her typical style of writing but I’m definitely planning to check out her other books based on how much I enjoyed this one. It’s a quick, gritty read that will leave readers thinking long after they’ve finished.
Criminal starts off with a bang and while it does fizzle out a bit after that first initial shock, it quickly picks back up and will have readers turning pages as fast as they can.    It’s not necessarily an action packed story but it’s a very gripping read.  It’s a story full of shocking twists and I didn’t see most of them coming.  That’s what really kept me reading.  
The dialogue style threw me off for a little while but I got used to it within the first 30 pages.  All of the main characters (Nikki, Dee, Bird) talk like they are uneducated (which they are.)  It’s not an often used style of dialogue and so I wasn’t sure how I felt about it at first.  Once I got used to it though, I realized that the story would not have come across the same way without it.  It will definitely bother some readers but if you can get past that, the story is worth it.
The characters are not easy to like, at all.  Take Nikki, for example.  She’s blinded her “love” for Dee.  All she ever thinks about it what’s best for him.  She’s obsessed with him and it gets really annoying.  She completely ignores all his bad qualities and relies on him for her happiness.  She gets really whiny and needy when he ignores her (which he does often) and the abusive way he treats her gets completely overlooked.  The second half of the story is when I came to actually like her, not a lot, but some.  She grows a backbone and finally realizes that maybe Dee isn’t as great as she originally thought.  She’s still not a great character but she was better.  Then there’s Dee.  Readers don’t get to know much about him except how he acts around Nikki.  I hated his guts based on his interactions with Nikki.  He’s the worst kind of guy out there and if I could, I would have reached into the book and beat the crap out of him.  He had no redeeming qualities.  As for Nikki’s mom, Bird, the cops; they’re not a huge part of the story.  They all play their roles but I really didn’t have feelings for them, one way or the other.  
Also, while I’ve never been to prison (and don’t ever plan on going!) the setting did seem very realistic.  I’m not sure what kind of research Terra Elan McVoy did for this story but everything seemed genuine.  It’s definitely not your typical setting and I found it a refreshing change, if a little scary.  
Overall, Criminal is a very unique contemporary for YA.  While I didn’t love it, I greatly enjoyed it and I think fans of Terra Elan McVoy’s other books will too.  
What others have to say about Criminal:
Maji Bookshelf’s review: I do believe that Terra Elan McVoy is a brilliant author for invoking so much emotions towards her characters.”

City of Books’ review: Criminal is an enjoyable YA crime novel, with great writing and an intriguing backstory.” 

Bunbury in the Stacks’ review: I look at Criminal as a shining example of what the New Adult label should have been.” 
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11 comments

  1. completely agree with all your review.. I felt the author made this book authentic.. with the way the characters talked, to the horrible way that idiot Dee acted, because let’s face it, a ton of guys are jerks like that. However Nikki.. oh man she was SO HARD to stomach. Like you, I only started liking halfway towards the book but she still wouldn’t make it to my top 100 favorite YA characters. I also believe this book is very unique and different form the usual contemporaries!

    great review Katie,
    – Juhina @ Maji Bookshelf

  2. This one sounds really unique – written in dialect, with mostly unlikeable characters and an intense setting, but it sounds like it WORKS. It’s good to know that the dialogue is different but that it made sense — sometimes those things can really surprise you and it can be hard to get past them. Definitely adding this on to the TBR list!

  3. I really want to read this book!! It sounds so unique and I haven’t read any books by this author yet (but I’ve been wanting to!!). I’m glad to see your review and know it’s worth reading 🙂

    PS- Hope you have fun at BEA!!

  4. Now I’m a little bit curious. Not many stories have followed the characters into jail so it sounds like something original. Although I’m worried about the characters, they are a really important part of a book for me. Thanks for the review,

    -P.E. @ The Sirenic Codex

  5. I’ve heard great things about this book, especially about how unique it is within the YA contemp market right now. Books written in dialect or just linguistically different than how we speak also take me a while to adjust to, but if they’re done well then I love reading them. Glad you enjoyed this so much. I can’t wait to read it myself!

  6. I haven’t heard of this book until now, but I think I might have to give it a go now. It seems like I might potentially like it despite the fact that it’s not something I would normally read. Thanks for the great review!

  7. I love her contemporaries. They’ve got a lot of spunk and emotion and real, flawed characters you’ll love.

    This one sounds darker and more issue-driven but your review reinforces my opinion that this author can write anything 🙂